Narrative, Adaptation and Interpretation: Out with old and in with the New.. Ideas

Story Board derived from origional research:

This was rejected by the group because it was too character based and abstract, menaing i had to explain what i ment by the different things that were going on. to make it into an advert to attract young creative small buisness owners, it was too bleak. Also just after i made this i booked an interview with the Custard factory Boss, who gave me another, much simpler idea and the 2 adverts below show the way the group wants to tell the story. we would althought like to use some of the photographs we took of the buildings rather than the basic shapes used in the advert below. my role now is to make the script for the narrator and derrive the storyboard from it.